Wednesday 19 March 2014

Literacy homework

Write a short poem inspired by one or more of these images describing the space journeys involved.
Try to use figurative language such as similes, metaphors and personification in your poem.



This homework is due in on Thursday, 20th March.

10 comments:

  1. The man on the cold,lonely,dusty moon was standing as still as a statue.the exhaust is felt a very soft,warm ear from a dog.the man was floating above the humorous earth doing a football celebration.

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  2. The satellite was as long as an elephant's trunk,
    with a peanut on it's mouth.
    The blue and white sphere behind it was as a crystal house.

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  3. The Space shuttle was,
    like a man sneezing ,
    violently in the while,
    it was the middle,
    of winter,

    The Space man,
    was wondering in,
    in the cold depts,
    of space,

    The man happily,
    approached Jupiter,
    and stabbed the,
    American flag,
    into the,
    rocky sand,

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  4. The astronaut was staring at the waveing flag while satanding on the mysterious Moon;the white fluffy and puffy candyfloss followed the space craft on a mission;there was another astronaut floatting infront of a sparkling blue and white jewel.

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  5. the man stood as still as a table and the flag waved like a hand waving to the Sun.The ground on the moon was as dirty as a garbage chute on a garbage truck.The dust on the moon made the planet look like the Sahara Desert.

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  6. The astronaut was in front of a hugely round tennis ball. The satellite was as big as a space station.The Earth is space's swirly sky and fluffy cushion.

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  7. The man floats in space,
    He sees the big blue teardrop,
    As huge as a star.

    He flies like a hawk,
    He looks down at the cool world,
    As he goes over cities.

    The chain pulls him back,
    Back to the shuttle he goes,
    Mercury? lets go!


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  8. The astronaut floated into the icy depths of the moon with the space shuttle flying closely behind - fire and smoke trailing behind, like a shooting star. The spaceman slowly floated above the moon, before gracefully making descent. The astronaut stood staring at the waving flag, as if somehow mesmerized by it.

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  9. The astronauts were flying in to space
    from the Earth it looked like shooting star
    It went over the Earth that now looked like a
    blue and white pearl .

    the astronaut came out and finally got to
    walk on the moon they saw a little plant
    decided to explore but just then an alien
    came said "your no good go back to Earth"

    so he went back like a shooting star little lily made
    a wish her daddy came back the astronaut !
    he bought her a little something yes it was moon dust
    HORAY !!

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  10. The astronaut was showing his arms flying like a bird in the air.

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